Tuesday, January 19, 2010
Badalon mein
Most of us find some creation in clouds and this is what i found some day... like a potrait of a beautiful girl in the sky...then breez followed by thunder and drizzle and the result is....
Kahin door badalon mein, Tera naqsh ubhar aata hai,
Phir ye khayal aata hai, Shayad khuda bhi tujhe hi chahta hai,
Tabhi to badalon mein, tera naqsh banata rahta hai,
Badal bhi khoob idhlata hai, bal khata hai,
kah-kahe lagata hai, aur shokh adaon se dharti ko bhi satata hai,
phir ye soch kar sihar jata hai,
ke khuda uske pass kyon aata hai---3
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The idea of beloved hidden in clouds is very good and then the variaous changes a cloud go through and its comparison with human emotions is really good.
ReplyDeletewah wah Zeb sahab!
ReplyDelete1st of all, I like the way you notice things and then u converted all u c/perceived in such a beautiful composition showing emotions of all involved.
This art of perceiving things around and then shaping them, presenting them is not 2 easy. Try to keep bringing this in ur future writings...n u really write tOOoo Gud!
lol n gud luck!